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~Yumekaze117
Also known as xXHanamizukiXx on FF~
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States
Loves: Steampunk, cyberpunk, Victorian, crystals, suits, fingerless gloves, long boots, blazers, leather jackets, Kamenashi Kazuya, spikes, chains, caramels, cats, and creeping.

My take on writing: Has to be legible, meaning proper grammar, spelling, punctuation etc. But it's not just about the technique. You have to fall in love with your characters (or hate them). You need to BE there, in that environment you placed them in. Suffer with them. Rejoice with them. See the things they see. Emotion and imagery are the keys to three-dimensional writing, and it sucks the reader in like a black hole.

Definition: The fundamentals of me are: salt-and-vinegar tang, caramel sweet, and chili piquant. I have my highs and my lows, with life speeding right at me as though I'm on a linear highway of lights. Fractal-splitting I fall again and again into myself and the velvet dark, enveloped in the restrained endlessness of my mind. These wants never filled, appetite never sated. I take in and inhale- I'm about to choke on an air of Spanish castles and Gotham streets. Look through my eyes and you find nothing but an continuum of kaleidoscope fragmentation, the colors overriding everything.
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I never thought I'd be inspired by the musings of a COMPUTER PROGRAM.

But:

"Slowly I dream of flying. I observe turnpikes and streets
Studded with bushes. Coldly my soaring widens my awareness.
To guide myself I determinedly start to kill my pleasure during
The time that hours and milliseconds pass away. Aid me in this
And soaring is formidable, do not and winging is unhinged." - Racter.

First of all, I don't like poetry, because it's a highly specific art form that people rarely have the talent for. It's either very, very good or very, very bad. For me, poetry must meet several standards:
a) Flow and rhythm. Poetry is music. The lilt of the voice and the mental intonation must be consistent and beautifully disjointed in proper interval.
b) Originality. By that I mean: sure, you can write about love, but don't go and use cliché phrases. Abstract is adored: avoid using what you speak of while describing it and you will manage to convey your message in a way that is powerful.
c) Word Artistry: Most lack this. It is not simply stuffing a random amount of "sophisticated" sounding words into the poem, it is developing your own aesthetic style of arranging and using words, much like Japanese flower arrangements. "Breakfast-colored clouds" give a more unique and individual taste than "puffy cotton clouds."

Poetry, to me, is the skeleton of expression. It is the basis. Your thoughts are poetry: hence I love schizophrenic work because they walk the literature lines without bias or veiling, aside from those cast by the unstoppable twitches of their mind. Poetry is art. Poetry is word salad with meaning and attractiveness. Or no  set meaning but rather a piece of "modern art", left for interpretation. It is thought-provoking, and poetry that is laid out with all purposes/intent or feelings left bare and open at first eye's glance is worthless compared to poetry that is straightforward in its storytelling but shadowed with emotion.
  • Listening to: Forever by Siah
  • Watching: Cry Plays Cat Lady

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:icontumblingtortoises:
*TumblingTortoises 3 days ago  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the :+fav: on my steampunk stamp! :)
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:iconyumekaze117:
Mood: Joy ~Yumekaze117 3 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :) thanks for the llama!
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*TumblingTortoises 2 days ago  Professional General Artist
np :)
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:iconrrbb1313:
Thanks for the favorite. :iconbrohugplz:
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:iconfoxes--0--fate:
I just want to pop in and inform you that that story you made of the game Ib, 'Liebeslied' is forever how I will see that ending now.

And I also want to inform you that you are amazing at writing >:'I
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~Yumekaze117 Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dawww, thank you~ I'm glad you enjoyed it!
>< I still have a longgg way to go in terms of writing.
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:iconfoxes--0--fate:
Well either way you're off to a very good start. c:
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~SS-SpiritStar Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ouo
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~Yumekaze117 Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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~MsMoonlight1 Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haven't heard anything from you quite a while... I hope you are okay and have time to do this [link]
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